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Incipit: Newlyweds


A bride at the altar, her back turned to her future husband, kneels and cries in a church. The groom, standing behind her, appears concerned and confused. A priest is visible in the background. The church is bathed in the colorful light from stained glass windows, highlighting the emotional intensity of the moment.

Narrator

First person

Literary genre

Dramatic

Adaptability

4 of 5


 

I hate him. I hate his red, huge nose with those two hairy holes. I hate it even more when he sticks his index finger in it to wipe it off. He disgusts me. I hate his skin that smells like fish, his huge belly, his fat hands. And the breath is vomitous. But the nose is what I hate the most. I can't look at his face, it's impossible for me. That's why I leave the light off when he wants to make love. So I don't have to look at my husband.


 

Incipit Adaptability

High adaptability to creating non-genre stories, thrillers, action. Good adaptability to science fiction, fantasy, post-apocalyptic or adventure novels. Mediocre adaptability to urban fantasy.

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